persuasive essay in which you examine the idea in the statement and either prove or disprove it using an example from To Kill a Mockingbird

I have a rough draft. This is a persuasive essay in which you examine the idea in the statement and either prove or disprove it using an example from To Kill a Mockingbird and a separate example from our modern world (1980 to today). This persuasive essay will require you to dig into Harper Lee’s novel to provide textual support for your stance, as well as evidence of research on the modern example that you include in your argument. I would also like for you to edit it and make sure there are no senteces ending in prepositions, verb tense constitncy, and uses active voice. I have attatched pictures of the rough draft as well.