I’d took the qualifying exam, however the professor want to fix some parts.

I’d took the qualifying exam, however the professor want to fix some parts. The yellow part is wrong, so please edit some parts. If I need to order more, please let me know!!
For the question #1, please find another cellists next to Vandini, instrument makers during Baroque period at lease 2-3.
Also, for question #4, I am playing the modern cello, and baroque cello too, so the professor wants to write some my future career, he said I didn’t mention about the question at all. maybe put the future career when I graduate the doctoral student, get the job that is related with baroque cello and for that, I might need Baroque cello and Baroque bow and why? and what can I do for my future.. and I might need classical cello so I might need 3 bows. please explain professionally.
Question 2, c) Bach is actually Johann Sebastian Bach. Also the professor said the suites is from French word, meaning “to follow” is incorrect. so please, find the right answer and edit these all yellow parts.
This is what I’ve got from professor.
1) Question 1 (put in the plural form!)
Name other cellists next to Vandini, instrument makers, etc.
2) please answer question 4 appropriately
3) please check all highlighted words or phrases, double-check and correct spelling / translations & facts