item:What additional data, evidence, and/or information does the author need to provide in order to strengthen his or her rationale?

Learning Goal: I’m working on a psychology question and need an explanation and answer to help me learn.Below are three topic proposals written by graduate students in psychology for a class assignment that entails writing a literature review. The students were asked to state their topic and provide a rationale for why the topic is relevant to society. Your task is to provide feedback to each student on the following item:What additional data, evidence, and/or information does the author need to provide in order to strengthen his or her rationale? In your feedback, identify the sentence number for each piece of feedback and briefly describe why you think the author needs to provide more information in that sentence.Please upload your response in MS Word format.