what kind of international marketing project, need to specific, in what industry
Rewrite/ revise dissertation v6 based on the dissertation template attached. (1) Make sure that each chapter starts at the top of the page! Majority of the heading and sub-heading are not well placed with proper format. Numbering should be consistent throughout the whole proposal. (2) Form of declaration is not in correct form. (3) List of tables and figures on page 5 should not be shown at this stage as we assume that you have not started with your research and no result can be found before WMG’s approval on SDA form. (4) In Chapter 1, there is NO clear evidence that you have conducted a study focused specially on the topic of the study, with focus on special areas. The Problem is not well-defined and explained so that we can understand the special areas under study. Try to rewrite Chapter 1 and make your content with clear focus on STUDY OF PROJECT MANAGERS’ LEADERSHIP STYLES AND THEIR IMPACT ON INTERNATIONAL MARKETING PROJECT SUCCESS. (E.g. what kind of international marketing project, need to specific, in what industry, what kinds of problem they will have when these companies are put under such managers’ leadership styles. Any example for this type of company. Any news about the similar types of industry with such problems so that it can initiate you with the intention to conduct such research with research or practical value). The drive for starting a focused study with clear and highlighted problem in real situation is the clear in Chapter 1 (5) Since it is the proposal from your own work, we expect that all in-text reference should be found at the end of reference so that we can find the sources of reference and how you prepare the Chapter 1. Some are missing at the end and need to check. (6) With the title of “STUDY OF PROJECT MANAGERS’ LEADERSHIP STYLES AND THEIR IMPACT ON INTERNATIONAL MARKETING PROJECT SUCCESS”, you need to give more background information, especially for Project Manager in this International Marketing Company so that we understand how you select your interviewees in the research methodology. (7) Lots of efforts have been made on literature review. However, you should highlight the key variables that you will construct in the conceptual framework. The conceptual framework should be specific, not a general framework applied to all situations. With no well-defined scenario for your title in Chapter 1, your conceptual framework might not be fit for Master’s Degree project if the conceptual framework is just too general. (8) For research methodology, a lot of key issues are missing! Some information is essential to get approval for SDA application. List of respondents Discussion Guides / Questions to be asked for Research Timeline for the Research (plan should be set with timeline after SDA approval) Background and Experience of the Respondents under study How the research can be related to the conceptual framework while the conceptual framework should be specific for problem under particular scenario /situation. It should not be too general, far below the requirement of MSc Programme and Project Management. If too general, anyone with project experience can be interviewed. It is not the purpose of this MSc Research. The conceptual framework is used to answer specific problem, not general problem with answers on surface.