how to undertake substantial revision
There should be substantial changes, including all four STAR strategies (Substitute, Take out, Add, Rearrange) for the micro-essay (Barefoot). Must be 250 words or less.
First file is my micro-essay (Barefoot), second is a model for how to undertake substantial revision and last is examples of micro-essays.
Please let me know if you have any questions or need further information.