If not persuasive, what additional strategies/evidence would make a stronger argument?

Learning Goal: I’m working on a writing question and need an explanation and answer to help me learn.You have read “Work is a Blessing ” by Russel Honore pg. 162-163. Also, see the list of “Characteristic Features” pg. 147– an explicit position, an authoritative tone, good reasons and evidence, etc. Which of these characteristic features seem to be most effective in his narrative argument, and do you find his argument persuasive? If not persuasive, what additional strategies/evidence would make a stronger argument? Please respond in a post of a minimum of 150 words.
Requirements: 150 words