Rewrite the following email

Learning Goal: I’m working on a creative writing writing question and need a sample draft to help me learn.Rewrite the following email, focusing on the issues we discussed in Module 1 (warm up paragraphs, arrangement of information, narrative style, etc.). You may need to add and delete content to provide greater context and focus. Then explain your changes below the revised version of the email. Some tips: Be direct its not about (me) business writing is different Delete warm up paragraphs if the opening does not really advance the subject.data dump is a flood of details presented in no order it is easier to process ideas when presented a storybasic narrative structure is Beginning, build toward conflict, resolutionwrite the easiest first to build momentum
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