Creating a Database of Prospects
See an email message under Case for Problems 6.31 and 6.32: Creating a Database of Prospects from the textbook. Rewrite the email message for conciseness, grammatically correct, and clarity. Consider the following: unnecessarily long sentences, redundancy, empty phrases, and wordy prepositional phrases. Additionally, paragraph length should be appropriate and unneeded information should be eliminated. Grammar, punctuation, and spelling should also be considered when writing a message. You should focus on making the message as clear as possible.